english editing paraphrase and smoothen the sentence 1000 words

I wrote an essay about “asymmetry gender revolution”, but some sentences are copied from other articles, some may not be easy to read or have grammar errors.

Therefore, I need some help of

📍1. Paraphrase some paragraphs. (300 words)

📍2. Smoothen and polish the sentence (800 words)
(make sure that the sentences flow smoothly and easy to read)

📝 I’ve marked “which help do I need” in each paragraph.

💎 Please use plagiarism checker!

The essay is in the attachment.
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