make revisions to history paper

Please view the feedback and make the revisions based on what my professor said:


There is no need to put the titles of the articles in the text. This is an assessment of the articles. Mentioning the author is enough to identify the article in the text. The titles go in the notes.

This needs a stronger introduction that provides direction for the paper and has an original thesis that explains the essays as group;

This needs a stronger conclusion that ties the paper together and restates your original thesis that explains the essays as group;

You must cite all facts;

Use active voice;

You did not cite properly, follow directions;

Proof more, this needed many more rewrites;

Follow directions, failure to follow directions will result in more significant deductions on the next essay;

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